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Are there things/people at work that distract you so much that you struggle to get things done?

신봉규/2024-11-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

When I concentrate on my work, I can't hear anything even if the surroundings are noisy. That's why I don't mind even though my company is a bit noisy.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

When I concentrate on my work, I can't hear anything even if the surroundings are noisy. That's why I don't mind even though my company is a bit noisy.

>> When I concentrate on my work, I can't hear anything, even if the surroundings are noisy. That's why I don't mind, even though my company can be a bit noisy.

OR >> When I'm focused on my work, I tune out all the noise around me. That's why I don't mind the noise in my company.