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김재현/2024-11-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Hi Teacher, Divina Happy Monday, Thank you for giving me homework! Homework What do you think about spending too much money on buying things? My answer I spent too much money the old days, so I always regreted..The habit that spending too much is bad.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I spent too much money the old days, so I always regreted.
>>I spent too much in the old days, so I always regretted it.

2. The habit that spending too much is bad.
>>The habit of spending too much is bad.

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