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Who is the healthiest person you know? What do they do to stay healthy?

차진혁/2024-11-17

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I know the healthiest person is my friends Lee Woo-joo because he is very do they do to stay healthy is exercise. So I don't see he's not going to school

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Who is the healthiest person you know? What do they do to stay healthy?

I know the healthiest person is my friends Lee Woo-joo because he is very do they do to stay healthy is exercise.

>> My friend Lee Woo-joo is the healthiest person I know because he does exercise to stay healthy.

So I don't see he's not going to school

>> So I don't see him not going to school.

>> OR: That's why he is never absent from class.