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People get exercise while playing sports. Which sports are the best for fitnees.

차진혁/2024-11-17

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I think are the best for the fitness sports is running sports because running sports is healthy recovery. But, running for a vaccination people is unreasonable.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below.  


Cheers,
Jean~~



                       People get exercise while playing sports. Which sports are the best for fitness? 


I think are the best for the fitness sports is running sports because running sports is healthy recovery. 
>> I think the best sport for fitness is running because one can recover healthily. 

But, running for a vaccination people is unreasonable. 
>> But, running for a vaccination is unreasonable.
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