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How do you begin your day? Write about it.

차유진/2024-11-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I'm first lie on sofa next I wash my face next I'm wearing a clothes next I eating a breakfast and I go to school. It's been Yale's morning!
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your correced composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Enjoy your time for the rest of the day! 


Cheers,
Jean~~





                                                            How do you begin your day? Write about it.

I'm first lie on sofa next I wash my face next I'm wearing a clothes next I eating a breakfast and I go to school.
>> First, I lie on the sofa, wash my face, and wear my clothes. Next, I eat breakfast and go to school.

It's been Yale's morning!
>> That's Yale's morning!
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