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Are you close to your neighbors? How do you get along with them?

차유진/2024-11-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes, I think close my neighbors because every time we meet, say 'hello'every day and last time my neighbors gave snacks with me. So I think close my neighbors.
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Yes, I think close my neighbors because every time we meet, say 'hello'every day and last time my neighbors gave snacks with me.
>> Yes, I think I'm close to my neighbors because every time we meet, I say 'hello' every day, and my neighbors gave snacks to me last time.

So I think close my neighbors.
>> So I think I'm close to my neighbors. 
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