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Long time aog L enjoyed the with my family. These days L like alone and with my husband. WHY?=l went to rest.

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Hi, Michelle!

I agree! Sometimes it's nice to spend time alone so we can rest, and at least we don't have to worry about anything or anyone.

-T. Caitlyn

Long time aog L enjoyed the with my family.

>> Long time ago, I enjoyed time with my family.
These days L like alone and with my husband.
>> These days, I like being alone and spending time with my husband.
WHY?=l went to rest.

>> Why? Because I want to rest.