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If you could start a new collection today without worrying about money, what would it be?

임주미/2024-11-14

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I like bowls and dishes. when I took a trip I like to look around the kitchenware alone. Espacially, I love tiny and preety plates but it's difficult what I bring it. Also it's not cheap .

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Hi, Ju Mi! It guess you really love collecting souvenir plates and bowls. Thank you for sharing your insights. Have a great evening.

~T. Jewel

I like bowls and dishes.

>>CORRECT

when I took a trip I like to look around the kitchenware alone.

>>When I take a trip, I like to look around kitchenware stores by myself.
Espacially, I love tiny and preety plates but it's difficult what I bring it.

>>I especially love tiny and pretty plates, but it's difficult to bring them home.
Also it's not cheap .

>>Also, they are not cheap.