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Do you think the ambiance is important in restaurants? Why or why not?

이승훈/2024-11-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think ambiance of a restaurant is important. Actually, I don't like a noise place. i think When i eat, i have to be in a quiet ambiance to talk the other person. And if too loud, i have a difficult to hard the feel taste of food. I don't have mind a restaurant where I drink beer with my friends, but I think the place where I think eat should be quiet.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hun!

You are right! A drinking place like a pub or bar is typically noisy, so it doesn't matter if it's loud there. But restaurants are for eating, so it would be nice if the ambiance is peaceful and relaxing as well.

- T. Caitlyn

I think ambiance of a restaurant is important.

>> I think the ambiance of a restaurant is important.
Actually, I don't like a noise place.

>> Actually, I don't like noisy places.
i think When i eat, i have to be in a quiet ambiance to talk the other person.

>> I think when I eat, I have to be in a quiet ambiance to talk to the other person.
And if too loud, i have a difficult to hard the feel taste of food.

>> And if it's too loud, I have difficulty tasting the food.
I don't have mind a restaurant where I drink beer with my friends, but I think the place where I think eat should be quiet.

>> I don't mind a restaurant where I drink beer with my friends, but I think the place where I eat should be quiet.