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How do you see yourself 10 years from now?

신봉규/2024-11-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I want to retire in 10 years. So I want to save a lot of money within 10 years. After that, I want to live doing what I want to do.
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Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I want to retire in 10 years. So I want to save a lot of money within 10 years. After that, I want to live doing what I want to do.
>> I want to retire in 10 years, so I plan to save a significant amount of money within that time. Afterward, I want to live doing what I truly enjoy.
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