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양윤영/2024-11-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I’ll choose gimbap. It means make by gim and rice(bap) and diverse ingredients By making gimbap. There are many kinds of gimbap. I can make a gimbap that add as I like. Then I’ll eat everyday different gimbap.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Yun! 

Thank you for doing your homework! See you around!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I’ll choose gimbap.
>>CORRECT!

2. It means make by gim and rice(bap) and diverse ingredients By making gimbap.
>>It means making gim and rice(bap) using diverse ingredients.

3. There are many kinds of gimbap.
>>CORRECT!

4. I can make a gimbap that add as I like.
>>I can make gimbap and add ingredients as I like.

5. Then I’ll eat everyday different gimbap.
>>Then I’ll eat different gimbap every day. 
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