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What do you think makes a good citizen? Explain.

차유진/2024-11-12

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I think makes good citizen is pick up trash, not to throw away trash anywhere and good adherence to the rules. So I think I am good citizen because I good adherence them.
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                             What do you think makes a good citizen? Explain.


I think makes good citizen is pick up trash, not to throw away trash anywhere and good adherence to the rules.
>> I think a good citizen is someone who picks up trash, does not throw trash just anywhere, and adheres to the rules. 

So I think I am good citizen because I good adherence them.
>> So I think I am a good citizen because I adhere to them. 

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