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Do you like expensive restaurants? Why or why not?

이승훈/2024-11-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I eat out about two times a week. and i l like a going to new restaurent. i like a new eat and new menu. i want a various style food menu and enjoy. example chinese food, korean food and Southeast Asia food, etc.. recently i went to seafood restaurent. with viewing sea. seafood was very expensive. but tasty was very well. when i eat something, i don't think try to consider price. because of we go to work order to delicious food eat reason. so we should hard go to work.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hun!

I agree! We work very hard to earn money, so I think we deserve to eat and try various delicious foods, regardless of the price.

-T. Caitlyn

I eat out about two times a week.

>> CORRECT

and i l like a going to new restaurent.

>> And I like going to new restaurants.
i like a new eat and new menu.

>> I like trying new foods and new menu items.
i want a various style food menu and enjoy.

>> I want to enjoy a variety of food styles.
example chinese food, korean food and Southeast Asia food, etc..

>> For example, Chinese food, Korean food, and Southeast Asian food.
recently i went to seafood restaurent. with viewing sea.

>> Recently, I went to a seafood restaurant with a view of the sea.
seafood was very expensive. but tasty was very well.

>> The seafood was very expensive, but it tasted very good.
when i eat something, i don't think try to consider price. because of we go to work order to delicious food eat reason.

>> When I eat out, I don’t try to consider the price because we go to work so we can enjoy delicious food.

so we should hard go to work.

>> So we should work hard.