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What would you do if you won 600 million in the lottery?

김한희/2024-11-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
l will buy apartment ,car,and live the high life.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Han Hee!
Thank you for writing your homework. However, I would suggest that you focus on expanding your ideas a bit more.. Try to expound your ideas, in that way, you can check how high your vocabulary is and refine your sentence construction skills. Please do that next time. Have a great day!
T. Aki~

l will buy apartment ,car,and live the high life.
>> I will buy an apartment, a car and live a luxurious life.


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