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Is it easy or difficult to ride your choice of transportation?

박나현/2024-11-12

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i think commute time is difficult to ride public transportation in seoul because seoul is so small city but seoul live many people so commute time crowd public transportation like subway bus in my case i usually ride subway because subway arrived on time i feel like it is important things

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Hi, BELLA!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

i think commute time is difficult to ride public transportation in seoul.

>> I think the commuting time is difficult to ride a public transportation in Seoul.

because seoul is so small city but seoul live many people.

>> It's because Seoul is a small city, but a lot of people live there.

so commute time crowd public transportation like subway bus.

>> So, during the rush hour, it's so crowded in public transportations like subways and buses.

in my case i usually ride subway because subway arrived on time.

>> In my case, I usually ride the subway because the subway arrives on time.

i feel like it is important things.

>> I feel like it is an important thing.