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Do you believe that sometimes tough love is necessary for personal growth?

신봉규/2024-11-11

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I think love is unnessary for personal growth because personal growth comes from pain and trials. It's important to push yourself
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Hello! I'm so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I think love is unnessary for personal growth because personal growth comes from pain and trials. It's important to push yourself
>> I think love is unnecessary for personal growth because personal growth comes from pain and trials. It's important to push yourself.
OR >> I believe love isn’t essential for personal growth, as growth often stems from challenges and hardships. Pushing yourself is what truly matters. 
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