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Talk about your career change from Computer Science to Cabin Crew.

박나현/2024-11-11

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i already woked as a developer untill last years at that time my age was last time try somthing new because i visited europe for the first time last yesrs it was unforgettable exprience i feel like a big fish in a small pond i want to broaden my horizons and i want to live aboroad so i decided to purse new goal , cabin crew
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Ciao, Bella!
I am glad to hear that some people like you take the challenge of shifting to anew career. I admire the courage.
Good luck!
T. Aki~

i already woked as a developer untill last years
>>> I already worked as a developer until last year.

at that time my age was last time try somthing new
>>> At that time I realized that at my age, I wanted to try something new.

because i visited europe for the first time last years
>>> because I visited Europe for the first time last year.

it was unforgettable experience
>> It was an unforgettable experience.

i feel like a big fish in a small pond
>> I feel like a big fish in a small pond.

i want to broaden my horizons and i want to live abroad
>>> I want to broaden my horizons and want to live abroad.

so i decided to purse new goal , cabin crew
>>>  so I decided to purse new goal , to become a cabin crew.
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