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We live in a equl society, however the unequality is still alive. We have to make a new laws about equal. so we can prove we are all equal.

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~~Teacher Ryka^^

We live in a equl society, however the unequality is still alive.

>> We live in an equal society; however, inequality is still present.

We have to make a new laws about equal. so we can prove we are all equal.

>> We need to create new laws to promote equality so we can prove that we are all equal.