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What are you most scared of and how do you overcome it?

이진태/2024-11-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I sometimes had a nightmare what crashing a car. I don't know why, but I think it's my unconsciousness. It's difficult to overcome compeletly, because it's unconsciousness.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I sometimes had a nightmare what crashing a car.
>> I sometimes have a nightmare about crashing a car.

I don't know why, but I think it's my unconsciousness.
>> I don’t know why, but I think it’s related to my subconscious.

It's difficult to overcome compeletly, because it's unconsciousness.
>> It’s difficult to completely overcome because it comes from my unconscious mind.