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Cultural experience in Taiwan

양기연/2024-11-08

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I could see many Japanese products in Taibei. I heard that someTaiwanese people prefer Japan to China. I was surprised because the country was once a Japanese colony like my country. And on the streets, I could see many motorcycles. Like some Asian countries, motorcycles are their major vehicles. Their food I experienced was similar to Chinese food but I didn't taste strong seasonings such as coriander.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

Thank you for sharing what you experienced in Taipei. I also know from some videos that motorcycles are the primary mode of transport because some roads are so narrow that riding a motorcycle is more convenient than driving a car but I was surprised that Japanese products are popular there.

- T. Caitlyn

I could see many Japanese products in Taibei.

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I heard that some Taiwanese people prefer Japan to China.

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I was surprised because the country was once a Japanese colony like my country.

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And on the streets, I could see many motorcycles.

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Like some Asian countries, motorcycles are their major vehicles.

>> Like in some Asian countries, motorcycles are their primary vehicles.
Their food I experienced was similar to Chinese food but I didn't taste strong seasonings such as coriander.

>> The food I tried was similar to Chinese food, but I didn't taste strong seasonings such as coriander.