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What don't you like about your class in school?

차진혁/2024-11-07

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I don't like about my class in school first, History class time class many friends presentation opportunity is very small. second, my friends they are a very loud voice with class time.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good evening! 


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Jean~~




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I don't like about my class in school first, History class time class many friends presentation opportunity is very small.
>> The things I don't like about my class in school are, first, the history class time class because many of my classmates' presentation opportunities are very limited.

second, my friends they are a very loud voice with class time.
>> Second, my friends and classmates are very loud during class time.
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