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What do you usually order when you eat out?

이승훈/2024-11-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

i like do eat everything. so when always eat out new eat. specially i like a korean food. recently i ate ssambap. ssambap is usually many various vegetables and spicy pork(same as Pork Bulgogi) in composed. sometimes spicy pork instead of grilled fish is composed. also i like a pork and rice soup. when i eating pork and rice soup i don't need food anything else. i plan(want to) eat pork and rice soup ASAP day.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hun!

First, I want to say that the picture you sent was really good! Second, it's really nice to know that you are not a picky eater, so you can eat any food and try new ones too. I think that's nice because it allows you to enjoy and appreciate food more. I haven't tried ssambap because I'm not really into spicy dishes, but maybe it would be nice to try it in the future!

- T. Caitlyn

i like do eat everything.

>> I like to eat everything.

so when always eat out new eat.

>> So, I always like to try new food when eating out.
specially i like a korean food.

>> I especially like Korean food.

Recently, I ate ssambap.

>> CORRECT
ssambap is usually many various vegetables and spicy pork(same as Pork Bulgogi) in composed.

>> Ssambap is usually composed of many various vegetables and spicy pork (similar to Pork Bulgogi).
sometimes spicy pork instead of grilled fish is composed.

>> Sometimes, grilled fish is used instead of spicy pork.

also i like a pork and rice soup.

>> I also like pork and rice soup.
when i eating pork and rice soup i don't need food anything else.

>> When I eat pork and rice soup, I don't need anything else.
i plan(want to) eat pork and rice soup ASAP day.

>> I plan to eat pork and rice soup as soon as possible.