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Should beauty standards include people of all shapes, sizes, and colors?

신봉규/2024-11-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
People has different standards of beauty. We must recognize the diversity of beauty standards.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

People has different standards of beauty. We must recognize the diversity of beauty standards.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Everyone has their own standards of beauty, and we should appreciate the diversity in how beauty is perceived.
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