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Cats and dogs are the most common types of pets. What are some unusual or exotic pets that you have

오소민/2024-11-06

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I have heard that some people have a puma. wow. If I raise puma, I will be run away from it.
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Hello, Ridoria! I could never imagine but that exists. Some even raise lions.
-T. Sonny
I have heard that some people have a puma. 
>>Correct!
wow. If I raise puma, I will be run away from it.
>>Wow, if I were to raise a puma, I would run away from it.
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