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How does kindness show up in small, everyday ways?

박소은/2024-11-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
kindness come if I haved gived that person my kindness.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Sunny!
Look at the pattern suggested below. 
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
kindness come if I haved gived that person my kindness.
>> Kindness comes to me if I also show kindness to somebody else. 

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