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What do you do during your breaks between class in school and the academy my?

차진혁/2024-11-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I during breaks between class in school do read a Korean history book. And I during breaks between class in academy do play a soccer.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good night! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                          What do you do during your breaks between class in school and the academy?

I during breaks between class in school do read a Korean history book.
>> I read Korean history books during my class breaks in school. 

And I during breaks between class in academy do play a soccer.
>> And I play soccer during my breaks in the academy. 
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