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Where is the best place to have a picnic in Korea? Explain.

차유진/2024-11-05

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I think a amusement park because amusement park is fun and many people like a roller coaster but I don't like amusement park because amusement park is take waiting a long time and I don't like roller coaster
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Here's your correced composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided.  


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                             Where is the best place to have a picnic in Korea? Explain. 


 I think a amusement park because amusement park is fun and many people like a roller coaster but I don't like amusement park because amusement park is take waiting a long time and I don't like roller coaster 
>> I think amusement parks are the best picnic places in Korea because they are fun and many people like riding roller coasters, but I don't like amusement parks because you have to queue for a long time plus I don't like roller coasters.
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