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김재현/2024-11-05

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Hi, Teacher Divina! Thank you for giving me homework! Homework When was the last time that you asked for help from anyone? My answer I asked for help my parents, When I was 21 years old. I got my parents card to live when I didn't have a lot of money.

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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I asked for help my parents, When I was 21 years old.

>>I asked for my parents' help when I was 21 years old.

2. I got my parents card to live when I didn't have a lot of money.

>>I used my parents' card to live when I didn't have a lot of money.