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양윤영/2024-11-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

There are a few that I like restaurant. Frist is chicken franchise “자담치킨“ and I orde “맵슐랭”. Second is donkatsu restaurant “메종식당“ and I order original donkatsu. Last third, this is not restaurant. I like eat salt bread. I see bakery, when I walk a road. I but it. I like to find a good slat bread bakery.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun!

You have a nice selection of favorites! It’s great that you enjoy dishes from specific places like “자담치킨” for chicken and “메종식당” for donkatsu. Your love for finding good salt bread from bakeries also sounds delicious!

~ Teacher Trixia

CONTENT:

There are a few that I like restaurant.

- There are a few restaurants that I like.

Frist is chicken franchise “자담치킨“ and I orde “맵슐랭”.

- First is the chicken franchise “자담치킨,” and I order “맵슐랭.”

Second is donkatsu restaurant “메종식당“ and I order original donkatsu.

- Second is the donkatsu restaurant “메종식당,” and I order the original donkatsu.

Last third, this is not restaurant.

- Lastly, this one is not a restaurant.

I like eat salt bread. I see bakery, when I walk a road. I but it.

- I like to eat salt bread. When I see a bakery while walking, I buy from it.

I like to find a good slat bread bakery.

- I like to find a good salt bread bakery.