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What do you enjoy most about your job?

오혜영/2024-11-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

What do you enjoy most about your job? Actually, I don’t know whether I like my job or not. I work in this company , since 2022. I’m interested in using programs. But, I sometimes used to pack the materials when my coworkers are busy. At first, I thought that the materials are just product. But I acquired that It is a life for someone.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Stella! I hope you could find happiness in your job! ^^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Have a great day!

~T. Jewel

Actually, I don’t know whether I like my job or not.

>>CORRECT

>>Honestly, I’m not sure if I like my job.
I work in this company , since 2022.

>>I have worked at this company since 2022.
I’m interested in using programs.

>>I’m interested in using different programs.
But, I sometimes used to pack the materials when my coworkers are busy.

>>But sometimes I would pack the materials when my coworkers were busy.
At first, I thought that the materials are just product.

>>At first, I thought the materials are just products.

But I acquired that It is a life for someone.

>>But I realized that they are a livelihood for someone.