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What is your biggest fear for yourself?

차유진/2024-10-22

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I think my biggest fear is death because if I die, so my family is sad and I can't play with my friends. And I got the highest score N on my psychological test. 《N:fear, Trauma and stress》
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Here's your correced composition, Yale! Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a evening! 


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Jean~~



                                          What is your biggest fear for yourself?


I think my biggest fear is death because if I die, so my family is sad and I can't play with my friends.
>> I think my biggest fear is death because if I die, my family will be sad and I can't play with my friends.

And I got the highest score N on my psychological test.
《N: fear, Trauma, and stress》
>> CORRECT~~
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