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What factors are important to you when choosing a book to read? Reviews? A Recommendation from a fri

박홍식/2024-10-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
In my case, I usually think the most important thing is the front cover when I choose a book to read. This is because sometimes when I go to the bookstore, first I go to the best seller corner. At that site, I choose the book that is most fascinate me. Moreover, the pretty book cover has a nice story. However, sometimes it’s wrong, so I am discouraged by its story. Despite this situation. There are more high percentage of successful choosing, so I usually choose a book by it’s cover.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Mr. Hong Shik! I think we cannot deny the fact that appearance is a huge factor in getting someone's attention and we choose things that appeal to our interests.
-T. Sonny
In my case, I usually think the most important thing is the front cover when I choose a book to read. 
>>In my case, the most important thing when choosing a book to read is the cover. 
This is because sometimes when I go to the bookstore, first I go to the best seller corner. 
>> This is why sometimes when I go to the bookstore,  I go to the best-seller corner first. 
At that site, I choose the book that is most fascinate me. 
>>There, I'd choose the book that fascinates me the most. 
Moreover, the pretty book cover has a nice story. 
>>Oftentimes, books with pretty covers have nice stories. 
However, sometimes it’s wrong, so I am discouraged by its story. 
>>However, there are times that I could be wrong, so I am discouraged from reading the story. 
Despite this situation. There are more high percentage of successful choosing, so I usually choose a book by it’s cover.
>>Despite this situation, successful choices have a higher percentage, so I usually choose a book by its cover.
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