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류건우/2024-10-22

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Q: What kind of equipment do you use to listen to music? A: I use my earphone to listen to music. Actually, there's no other reason but because I don't have any other equipment to listen to music. If I can choose one, I would prefer headphone.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I use my earphone to listen to music.

>>CORRECT!

2. Actually, there's no other reason but because I don't have any other equipment to listen to music.

>>Actually, there's no other reason to use it but because I don't have any other equipment to listen to music.

3. If I can choose one, I would prefer headphone.

>>If I can choose one, I would prefer using headphones.