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What appliance do you wish you had in your home that you don’t currently own?

임주미/2024-10-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I would like to change cough. I have been using leather sofa for 15 years. I wish it simple and colorful design. If I change that, it will be fabric
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi. Ju Mi! Your leather sofa seems very sturdy! I’ve been thinking about buying a new sofa set, too! ^^ Thank you for doing today's homework. Have a great Tuesday!
~T. Jewel
I would like to change cough.
>>I would like to change the couch.
I have been using leather sofa for 15 years.
>>I have been using a leather sofa for 15 years.
I wish it simple and colorful design. 
>>I want it to have a simple and colorful design.
If I change that, it will be fabric
>>If I change it, I will go with fabric.
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