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How can we show everyone is equal?

신봉규/2024-10-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Accepting different perspectives in conversations with people around me. I can vote for candidates who support equality.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Accepting different perspectives in conversations with people around me. I can vote for candidates who support equality. 
>> I accept different perspectives in conversations with those around me, and I can vote for candidates who support equality.
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