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신이라/2024-10-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I disagree that facing improve the people.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Yi Ra!

Thank you for answering teacher's question! You did really well today~

~~Teacher Kate

I disagree that facing improve the people.

>>I disagree with the idea that facing challenges can improve people.