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박소은/2024-10-21

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I think it will be so happy because we can talk at there one country languages.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!

Take a look at the revised patterns.

This will afford some clarity.

I just streamlined your ideas.

Practice this more.^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think it will be so happy because we can talk at there one country languages.

>> I think it will make us so happy because we can speak with people from other countries using the same language.