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Moving grave

양기연/2024-10-21

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It is possible to move graves or urns with ashes from place to place. I don't know exactly whether moving grave is associated with a religion, for I have no any religion. And we have seen or heard about moving graves or urns. A few years ago, my relatives moved our great-grand parents' graves to other places. Some people remove their ancestors' graves and place the bodies in a charnel house .

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

Thank you for doing your homework. I asked this question because I am just curious since you mentioned you have to travel far just to visit your parents-in-law's graves. But thank you for clarifying in class that there are two siblings of your husband staying in the place where their graves are, so it's okay to leave them there.

- T. Caitlyn

It is possible to move graves or urns with ashes from place to place.

>> CORRECT

I don't know exactly whether moving grave is associated with a religion, for I have no any religion.

>> I don't know exactly whether moving graves is associated with a religion, as I don't have any religion.

And we have seen or heard about moving graves or urns.

>> CORRECT

A few years ago, my relatives moved our great-grand parents' graves to other places.

>> A few years ago, my relatives moved our great-grandparents' graves to another place.

Some people remove their ancestors' graves and place the bodies in a charnel house

>> CORRECT