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박소은/2024-10-21

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I go hiking and driving in nature. It's a great time to enjoy fall, with the beautiful colors and cool weather.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Anna~^^

That sounds wonderful! Fall truly is a magical time for outdoor activities. It is also my wish to enjoy the stunning scenic views of autumn.

~Kelly^^

I go hiking and driving in nature.

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>> I enjoy hiking and taking scenic drives in nature.

It's a great time to enjoy fall, with the beautiful colors and cool weather.

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Fall is the perfect time to experience the beautiful colors and refreshing cool weather.