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Do you think saving money is easier when you have a specific goal in mind?

박소은/2024-10-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

It depends on what your goal is. If your goal is to buy a house or a car, it is easier to save money. Otherwise, if your goal is to be a capable worker or a fashionista, it is harder to save money because you spend money on education or fashion.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Anna!^^

That's a great point! It's interesting how our goals can significantly impact our saving strategies. I guess it really comes down to prioritizing what we want most in life.

~Kelly^^

It depends on what your goal is.

>> Correct

OR:

>> It depends on what your goals are.

If your goal is to buy a house or a car, it is easier to save money.

>> Correct

OR:

>> If your goal is to purchase a house or a car, saving money is easier.

Otherwise, if your goal is to be a capable worker or a fashionista, it is harder to save money because you spend money on education or fashion.

>> Correct

OR:

>> On the other hand, if your goal is to become a skilled worker or a fashionista, it becomes more challenging to save money since you will spend it on education or fashion.