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류건우/2024-10-18

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Q: How can a lot of stress affect your physical health? A: I think usually when people are under a lot of stress, they directly have a physical effect. I'm not actually sure about it, but I think I've heard that the blood flows faster so their body temperature gets higher. Also, I think while people are under stress, they can't get to sleep easily, and I think it would also affect physical health.
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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think usually when people are under a lot of stress, they directly have a physical effect.
>>I think usually when people are under a lot of stress, it has a direct physical effect on them.

2. I'm not actually sure about it, but I think I've heard that the blood flows faster so their body temperature gets higher.
>>I'm not actually sure about it, but I've heard that the blood flows faster when they're stressed, so their body temperature gets higher.

3. Also, I think while people are under stress, they can't get to sleep easily, and I think it would also affect physical health.
>>Also, I think while people are under stress, they can't get to sleep easily, so it would also affect their physical health.

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