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오혜영/2024-10-17

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I attatched the homework. Plz check this. I always thank you for your teaching. Have a nice day.🤩

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Hi, Stella! I believe that whatever hardships we experience in life, everything will be all right in the end. ^^ Fighting! Have a great weekend!

~T. Jewel

When I'm not feeling well, I usually focus on the other topic.

>>When I'm not feeling well, I usually focus on something else.
In a way, I might run away far from the problems.

>>In a way, it's like running far away from the problems.
Sometimes, I sleep or watch a drama or talk with my friends, etc.

>>Sometimes, I sleep, watch a drama, or talk with my friends.
After time goes by, like this, I think about the problems or the topics.

> As time goes by, I think about the problems or issues.

And then it is not important thing anymore most of case.

>>And then, it’s no longer important in most cases.
But, I might feel more painful.

>>But, I might feel more pain.
It just delay the judgement.

>>It just delays the judgment.