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Why do you think many people smoke?

장재영/2024-10-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think to smoke of a habit or stress.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, James! Thank you for this answer. It was short and straightforward. Please feel free to share ideas any time. Smoking doesn't do anything good for our health. Let's hope smokers could find a better habit or way to relieve stress. See you soon!
--Teacher Anji

I think to smoke of a habit or stress.
>> I think people smoke as a habit or to relieve stress. 
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