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ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Eva!
You made some great points
about how important it is to take breaks and recharge. Its a good reminder
that working non-stop can lead to burnout, just like the story you shared about
someone who learned the hard way. Im glad to hear he found a better balance
and is now healthy and happy. Remember, taking time to relax isnt just a
luxury; its necessary for doing our best work. Keep up the good work, and
dont forget to take some time for yourself!
~Teacher Cathy
I
think that relaxing is very important.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I
believe that relaxing is very important.
So God
give us the weekend.
>>So
God gave us the weekend.
We
can't continue to work.
>>CORRECT
OR>>We
can't keep working.
If we
don't have relaxing, we can't make good results.
>>If
we don't relax, we can't achieve good results.
I know
someone, he work hard every days, he never had relaxing time, he eventually god
a bed disease.
>>I
know someone who works hard every day. He never had time to relax, and he
eventually got a bad disease.
He
spend a lot of time and money for curing disease.
>>He
spent a lot of time and money on curing his disease.
He
changed his mind after recover from the disease.
>>He
changed his mind after recovering from the disease.
He
started to enjoy relaxing.
>>CORRECT
OR>>He
began to enjoy relaxing.
Now he
very healthy and seems likes happy.
>>Now
he is very healthy and he seems happy.
I
think to relax is to start for a work.
>>I
think that relaxing is the starting point for work.