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Have you ever bought something you later wished you hadn’t? What was it?

임주미/2024-10-15

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Of course, that was a luxury bag. after I get the bag, I rarely use. I just keeping long time.I recently sold it by second-hand at the App market
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Hello, Ju Mi! Luxury bags are so expensive! It's a good thing you sold it and made some money back. Thank you for today's homework. Have a fun day ahead of you!
~T. Jewel
Of course, that was a luxury bag.
>>Of course, that was a luxury bag.
after I get the bag, I rarely use.
>>After I got the bag, I rarely used it.
I just keeping long time.
>>I've just been keeping it for a long time.
I recently sold it by second-hand at the App market
>>I recently sold it as a second-hand item in the app market.
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