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김재현/2024-10-14

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Hi teacher Divina. I need to try speaking English, but I didn't hear the things that you speak English finally I didn't understand.. I'm sorry.. I will try!! Homework Are you always updated with the latest trend? Why or Why not? My answer I updated the trend in the past but I not updated it now because these days I get many lazy. I make to sentence. Can you feedback the sentence? 1.Connect calling tp me right now. 2. Jeju Island don't have connected the bridge.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework. I think that when it comes to learning, the place also plays an important role.

Is it possible for you to find a quieter place? Maybe it will be easier for you that way.

Thank you for always trying. :)

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I updated the trend in the past but I not updated it now because these days I get many lazy.

>>I used to be updated with the trend, but I got lazy, so I'm not so updated about it now.

2. Connect calling tp me right now.

>>You can connect by calling me right now.

3. Jeju Island don't have connected the bridge.

>>Jeju Island is not connected by a bridge.