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김나라/2024-10-13

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing task: Who has taught you a lot in your life? Maybe recently when I has experience a depression my doctor gave a guideline of life to me. I think her story helped me because she taught me things about myself that I didn't know I had. Thanks to her, I have read a lot of books and I think they are taught my life.
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Hello, Ms. Nala! I'm so glad you are caring for yourself and have found very good people around you, like your doctor. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
Maybe recently when I has experience a depression my doctor gave a guideline of life to me.
>>Maybe, because recently I have been experiencing depression, it is my doctor who has been guiding me in life nowadays.
I think her story helped me because she taught me things about myself that I didn't know I had.
>>I  think, her story has helped me because she taught me things about myself I didn't know I had.
Thanks to her, I have read a lot of books and I think they are taught my life.
>>Thanks to her, I also have read many books which taught me a lot in life.
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