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How do you balance rest and productivity in your daily routine?

신봉규/2024-10-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I distinguish between work time and break time for my balance rest and productivity in my daily routine. Rest is important because without rest I become negative.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

I distinguish between work time and break time for my balance rest and productivity in my daily routine. Rest is important because without rest I become negative.

>> I distinguish between work time and break time to maintain a balance between rest and productivity in my daily routine. Rest is important because, without it, I become negative.

OR >> I differentiate between work hours and break times to keep a balance of rest and productivity in my daily routine. Rest is essential, as I become negative without it.