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김재현/2024-10-10

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Hi , techaer Divian Thank you for giving me your homework Homework What is your dream business? My dram business is to make a lot of money and I will make a swimming pool

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. My dram business is to make a lot of money and I will make a swimming pool.

>>My dream is to make a lot of money to be able to make a swimming pool.