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Music is spice everything up.
서다은/2024-10-09
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Music is spice everything up.
I’m listening to music when I go to work everyday.
But in particular, I’m listening to high tempo of music in Monday morning.
The music changes feeling according to the tempo.
And, I go to work than usual late for avoid ‘Monday Blues’
My company commutes freedom compare to the other company!
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I couldn't agree more with you, Daeun! Music is like therapy. May you always find comfort in it.-Faith-
Music is spice everything up.
>> Music spices everything up.
I’m listening to music when I go to work everyday.
I’m listening to music when I go to work everyday.
>> I listen to music when I go to work every day.
But in particular, I’m listening to high tempo of music in Monday morning.
But in particular, I’m listening to high tempo of music in Monday morning.
>> However, in particular, I listen to high-tempo music on Monday mornings.
The music changes feeling according to the tempo.
The music changes feeling according to the tempo.
>> The music changes in feeling according to the tempo.
And, I go to work than usual late for avoid ‘Monday Blues’
And, I go to work than usual late for avoid ‘Monday Blues’
>> Also, I go to work later than usual to avoid the 'Monday blues'.
My company commutes freedom compare to the other company!
My company commutes freedom compare to the other company!
>> My company offers more commuting freedom compared to other companies.
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